昨天,悠丫丫問:“媽媽,你能幫我看看這篇作文嗎?” 心想,今天怎麼那麼抬舉你老媽啊?啥時候寫東西需要讓咱過目了呢?心中雖犯疑惑,嘴上還是忙不迭地答應:“好啊”。 湊上前去,映入眼帘的題目是“A Leap of Faith”,大腦高速運轉,試圖揣測一下內容,這leap 在腦子裡轉了幾圈,反饋回來的是一串:???... 還是直接進入主題吧,張嘴就開始朗讀:“I wiped my sweaty palms on the back of my silky dress. The claps of the audience….” 正讀得起勁,覺得寫得也有點意思,女兒在邊上發話了,“媽媽,你只能在心裡讀。” “嗯?!為什麼呀?” “這是心理活動的描寫。大聲讀出來就沒有味道了。” “哦?!” 默默地細細地讀完了。 “不錯,寫得不錯,”順手哈格了一下女兒,“媽媽都能感受到你在台上那幾分鐘faith的升華了。” 我提了個問題:“可怎麼這麼短, 才一段?” 女兒說:“這是一種寫作的style,叫 snapshot writing. 字數限制在255個之內”,接着叨叨,“老師要把這篇作文送去參加 writer’s showcase 的比賽。” “那好啊。媽媽就先收藏了。” 丫丫想從老媽這兒就寫作水平得到指教,是沒指望了。老媽所能做的,就剩下鼓勵了。 A Leap of Faith I wiped my sweaty palms on the back of my silky dress. The claps of the audience boomed out like thunder, drumming in my ears, acting like a steady beat propelling me to my fate. The harsh click of my heels intimidated me in the brief silence before I took my seat at the piano. I bathed in the golden light for just a second as the panic struggled to overtake me. I forced my hands up to stroke the ivory keys and I took a deep breath. In the moment that I played the first key, everything was brilliantly clear and beautiful, exhilarating like jumping off a cliff. It was a leap of faith that I would remember, remember exactly how my fingers moved in their patterns. It was a leap of faith that I would remember the sickening sweet quality of the beautiful melody and the absolute rush of my fingers flying in the climax of the piece. I couldn’t see any of the people watching me from the audience. It was a good thing. I knew if I switched my focus to something else for just a second, I would lose the trance I was in and the music would be tarnished and broken. The humming of the blood in my ears and flutters in my stomach were coming to a stop. The clapping came again, comforting this time and I floated back to earth. |