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《Forget Me Not》不是开玩笑。 2016-05-08 21:32:13

大约半年前,在‘大树’兄的博客里,看到曹兄两首五律:

    一叶秋(兼和山人兄大作)不肯随风去,蛛丝缠满尘。 空悬难辨假,枯萎怎存真。 昨夜闲风雨,寒窗旧古今。 长街谁顾叶,沾脚恼行人。

   冰乃水初寐,灰因火已空。烛寒滴热雨,恨短吁长风。醉将刀比月,醒借弈连城。窗养一湖墨,非蛇或是龙?

 诗坛现在是,中雨、洋雨、落词盘、想不湿都难。瞎译上面的第一首,后面、有兴趣的朋友接着湿。

flawed  refused to go with the wind.
Veins,  as spide web,coiled dust.
distinguish yourself suspicions in the air
soon it faded when have been cut.
leisure activities in last night.
past rain knocked window side.
Amour was exiled. Be annoyed.
Forget Me Not, have no kid.

   【曹雪葵】

    情字原无解,由来困世人。徒怜春蝶舞,难救寂寥心。

   君誓不吾忘,妾犹牵梦深。 年年盼归雁,含泪数飘云。

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作者:洛基山人 留言时间:2016-05-10 20:59:23

忘了,聊斋常客还赠我诗一首,‘池小由来起风波,物繁糜少竟天泽。无意插柳池边地,圃间常现无因果。 葱山峻岭望明月,星转斗移数天河。寄寓海外岂本意,望君常念宇宙歌。“真有点‘聊斋’的韵味。

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作者:洛基山人 留言时间:2016-05-10 20:49:54

贺兰山译文精彩,忠实原著,不像我胡扯,八歪。在此保存;

It is reluctant to go with the wind to anywhere , Being wrapped with spider silk and dust hanging in the air. Flawed and withered itself as the blowers through, It is hard to tell which is false which is true, Last night rain made the window wet and cold That still keeps the dark color as old. No one cares about a fallen leaf on the street, It annoys pedestrians when sticking on the feet. -

诗友‘聊斋常客’译了最难的第二首;

A Fall leaf by window (part 2)Ice is the water that just falls into sleeping, Ashes are residuals after the fire totally burning.he candle drips hot tears in night along with the cold raining, The life is so short, I want to cry with the windy long howling.A knife is compared to the curved moon when I'm drunk drinking, Battling the Game of Go, awaken by checkerboard, till last winning. By the windows, there is a pen and the dark ink ready for painting , By whose the signature likes a flying snake or dragon, it will become a scene of life-saving? -

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作者:洛基山人 留言时间:2016-05-09 21:33:33

在万维诗坛的评论,本想贴在大家的留言后面,但曹兄这首,应该多说几句,就另发一贴了。曹兄很多诗词,都有义山的风格,‘隐奥幽艳,新意险语”、元好问有句’"诗家总爱西昆好,独恨无人作郑笺",其实历代作“郑笺"不少,只是这类诗词,表现的是‘伞状型的思维’,而我们欣赏的正是这种可解不可解之间的瑰诡。如果一定要解释出个‘意思’,恐怕也是错的。为什么在‘大树兄’的博客里有曹兄这两首【五律】,我现在忘记了,但最近看到‘勿忘我’就引发了点联想。曹兄这头一句里的‘主人公’。可能是做了点荒唐事,第二句说明心里很纠结。还有些内疚,为什么要说‘勿忘我’呢?但那时还真不是在‘开玩笑’。到第二首,心情就比较开朗了,爱谁谁,看看今天美国共和党总统‘床铺’。‘我就是我自己’。你们形容成什么‘龙’呀‘蛇’呀。其实还不是一个池子里的‘墨’。

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作者:洛基山人 留言时间:2016-05-08 21:40:25

The love word is historically confounding,

and it has only become growingly baffling.

Futile to envy the dancing spring butterflies,

how could they rescue a heart of loneliness.

You swore to God that I'd never be forgotten,

I've been entangled in dreams unrelenting.

Annual wish for geese to return comes short,

eyes in tears find numerous clouds free of fault. [豌豆博0】

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作者:洛基山人 留言时间:2016-05-08 21:38:36

- Love, can anyone in the world explain? Butterfly dance can not add joy in the lonely heart plain. “Forget me not!” those words tied up the memory of mine Waiting for you is being my wish hanging upon the blue sky -

【绿岛阳光】

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作者:洛基山人 留言时间:2016-05-08 21:36:20

几位诗友的英文诗,特留存。

:《Forget Me Not》 It baffles: Love or Amour? Answers are zero. Butterfly dances in detour, But my heart flies solo. Forget Thee Not was the promise of Thy, These words repeat in my dreams, pretty much dire, Year by year I wait for the second coming of Thy With the flight of clouds my tearful hopes are blown dry.

【爪子哥】

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