试译英文诗《You say that you love rain》

说明：英文诗《You say that you love rain》在几年前曽引起汉译的热潮，各种译本精彩纷呈，难以尽道。其中以引申炫技者居多。今天，。。。我尝试自译一次，看看能否做到基本上忠实于原意？恐怕还是眼高手低，敬祈能者指点。 

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2019年1月14日

英文原诗：

You say that you love rain,

but you open your umbrella   when it rains...

You say that you love the   sun,

but you find a shadow spot   when the sun shines...

You say that you love the   wind,

but you close your windows   when wind blows...

This is why I am afraid;

You say that you love me too...