【定風波】譯雨花英文詩（詞林正韻，歐陽炯體）

by 快活老人  5/1/2019 修訂

細雨如花春醉娑，眾生甦醒起瀾波。

苞綻生機還枯萎，似醉，舞衣落下淺塘窩。

生活簡單何必斗？看透。水流低處潤香荷。

水汽入雲誰復見？和莞。細漪花瓣靜無波。

註：莞，此處仄音，意莞爾。

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【定風波】譯雨花英文詩《定風波》 （詞林正韻，歐陽炯體）4/28/2019

細雨如花春醉娑，眾生甦醒起瀾波。

苞綻生機還枯萎，似醉，舞衣落下淺塘窩。

生活簡單無酷斗，看透。向低流水潤香荷。

蒸汽升高難再顯。和莞，細漪花瓣靜無波。 

註：莞，此處仄音，意莞爾。

附 雨花君原玉：

Settle the ripple

 4/28/2019

Whenever spring comes with a drizzle,

Wherever life starts to become a puzzle,

Flowers break out dormant cycle with a sizzle,

while wither,

Happily dancing into a shallow puddle.

Life seems to be that simple, no struggle.

Water flows low to become invaluable.

 Vapor reaches high up to sky, not accessible. 

Life means peace to be a petal or a ripple.