【定风波】译雨花英文诗（词林正韵，欧阳炯体）

by 快活老人  5/1/2019 修订

细雨如花春醉娑，众生苏醒起澜波。

苞绽生机还枯萎，似醉，舞衣落下浅塘窝。

生活简单何必斗？看透。水流低处润香荷。

水汽入云谁复见？和莞。细漪花瓣静无波。

注：莞，此处仄音，意莞尔。

初稿：

【定风波】译雨花英文诗《定风波》 （词林正韵，欧阳炯体）4/28/2019

细雨如花春醉娑，众生苏醒起澜波。

苞绽生机还枯萎，似醉，舞衣落下浅塘窝。

生活简单无酷斗，看透。向低流水润香荷。

蒸汽升高难再显。和莞，细漪花瓣静无波。 

注：莞，此处仄音，意莞尔。

附 雨花君原玉：

Settle the ripple

 4/28/2019

Whenever spring comes with a drizzle,

Wherever life starts to become a puzzle,

Flowers break out dormant cycle with a sizzle,

while wither,

Happily dancing into a shallow puddle.

Life seems to be that simple, no struggle.

Water flows low to become invaluable.

 Vapor reaches high up to sky, not accessible. 

Life means peace to be a petal or a ripple.