‘Seasons In the Country’ 四季與音樂譯上

-試 加題: 來自山谷的回音, 原創:http://blog.hjenglish.com/jiangxiaohong/

一語,按：
這一篇原譯自上海的一家英語網,覺得有點大都市的小布爾喬亞,有點shanghai 氣息,就留下了，
When I was doing it, I felt not sure if I could complete it or not, but bit by bit, I finally did it, but I am not sure if it is okay to read aloud or in silence. As I have always been, curious and eager to know your comments; critics are welcome, and wish you feel not waste of your time or still brining you some enjoyment?

When \'thanksgiving\' holidays, I have been thinking that if it is ancient adore to the nature that gives us, then there is friendship we can warship too on earth, or earthly. 此貼獻歌 West Canada 的朋友們

It\'s getting warmer and warmer these years, even by the lake you feel so; when spring had gone far, and summer ended, then was the moment we would have been missing them now. Just had smelt the fall, then the steps of winter have been heard approaching already.
Thanksgiving days.

春天: Sun, no argues, the immortal-icon of vitality. Spring, is the best season for ‘John Denver’s’ or ‘Alan Jackson’s’, country romances sung by those handsome cool-boys. If you may, just find a big and heavy mug full of fresh milk, and drink it. Impossibly, not be able to picture yourself into the scene of a ranch, like a cowboy, be drunken with the west-dreams or fancying of at the night-fire, singing, or maybe, chasing after a bus riding to the greenness of the massive land left behind. When music ended, licking  lips sugary, and creamy; likely, being perhaps poetic trying to read in silence a poem of spring authored whomever.

APRIL is the cruelest month, breeding
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.
T. S. Eliot: The Waste Land
四月是最殘忍的一個月，荒地上
長着丁香，把回憶和欲望
參合在一起，又讓春雨
催促那些遲鈍的根芽。
－－ 趙蘿蕤譯艾略特的《荒原》

夏天，陽光透過樹木的枝幹投下班駁的影。在蒸騰的熱浪里，找出The Judds、Dolly Parton的唱片來放。然後去便利店買一瓶冰鎮的ram jazz，我喜歡lime口味的。對於熱愛鄉村音樂的人來講，生活再艱難，都有一個屬於自己的夢想天台。外面有嘈雜的人聲和車流，想象自己一身乾淨利落的裝扮 —— 牛仔帽、筆挺的牛仔褲、大號的皮帶扣、西部風情的靴子，坐在莊園裡聽純正的音色帶來的簡樸卻不失真摯的歌曲。實在是一種不太喧譁的享受。當然，你也可以在夏天的音樂中想象自己對着心愛的女孩大聲誦讀莎士比亞的名句：

夏天: Through the summer leaves, its shadowing patens magically drawn on the tree and at our foot. In blistering heat, humid, if ‘The Judd’s’ or Dolly Patron’s were picked, next, is an \'iced-Ram Jazz\' from next-door convenience, but not to forget Li me’s. For ‘country’ lovers, even the days are long and harsh, there is always moments to dream: day-dreaming in the noise of crowd, traffic; a  cowboy neat look, a hat, a big-buckled belt, surely, a western-boots; relaxing in the fields; with the melodies bringing you end-less simplicity and sincerity, only from the country; A country luxury that beyond imagination never too lavishly. Or sure, you may also recite to your hearty-one loudly, the Shakespeare’s sonnets’().

Shall I compare thee to a summer\'s day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer\'s lease hath all too short a date.
― William Shakespeare
能否把你比作夏日璀璨？
你卻比炎夏更可愛溫存；
狂風摧殘五月花蕊嬌妍，
夏天匆匆離去毫不停頓。
――孫梁譯

@@湖畔 to be continued, [此貼子已經被作者於2006-12-16 4:06:55編輯過]
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Reversed and To be continued

一語湖邊,（John@Lakeshore）
  Noted for personal study, and future diggings;
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