Summer is around the corner,
the garden full of yellow flowers,
waiting for our homecoming daughter .
夏天来了
院子里开满黄色的小花
等待着远行的女儿回家
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附鲜花盛开的院子照片:
谢谢!期望能多看到更多力作。
webeditor@creaders.net
Good! Changed.
Good job. 与作者商榷,仅供参考。I think "around the corner" is better than "on the corner". Two "is"s are a bit redundant. I would change the second to: our garden full of yellow flower". Thanks.