QINNY --- My very first English poem to Qinny ( 芹泥）
Qinny, I dreamed of you last night again...
You had taken the portal back to Dynasty Wei-Jin,
To accompany Master Ruan Ji;
You sang a song of Lord Cao,
And pointed a sword to demons and trolls.
Staring at you from afar,
How great admiration had I in my heart !
In the showers of summer blossoms,
To seek your trail I went to your place ;
Your garden was still green and blooming,
The portal was no more busy.
Sitting around the stone table,
The ancients had ever fallen to silence deep;
like silver bells ringing in the air,
The laughter of the girls rised above the river...
What did your voice sound like, Qinny?
So much wondered I had...
Rowing the boat you prepared for me,
I wanted to sail to the shore of your dream.
Oh, should I wait for you at the portal,
You and me would be just a click away;
Back to the place where you were,
I hoped so much to see you again!
Please tell me, Qinny,
Whether my boat entered your dream today... 此詩昨晚貼出後，便外出了，沒想到詩壇曹雪葵大俠給予了高度評價，還翻譯成了中文的古詩，非常精妙。 太驚嘆於曹大俠的詩才，太令我受寵若驚了。 他的翻譯使此詩的境界更高了一層，還多了許多的古詩意境。 現抄錄於後，以表達我的敬意。
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昨夜入君夢，
魏晉越星門。
傲世阮籍眼，
指劍曹公吟。
驚見威魔怪，
欽羨喚我心。
曾憶落花雨，
覓蹤尾瑤琴。
園中紅綠靜，
藤門寂無塵。
石桌對牽袖，
沉思追古人。
忽似銀鈴舞，
嬉笑滿河濱。
從未聽君唱，
清聲每欲聞。
備舟好搖櫓，
隨君追夢頻。
或當依門候，
轉瞬接胸襟。
舊帆尋不遠，
馨香得再親。
君兮告我：
殷勤今夜舟，
枕前看可真？
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